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This bird has a strange view of the world. Trying to fly faster than "normal" is a bit of a worry. I wonder if this author wrote anything else and actually got paid for it. It would take a very strange person to get the message of this story. "....he found that moving more than one feather at that speed will spin you like a rifle ball ..." Checking the physics behind this story would be an interesting task, but it just might detract from the splendour of the tale. Thankyou. I have changed the spelling in the title. Comments:From balo0018 - 10/23/06 7:01 PM From sieb0024 - 10/22/06 6:31 PM Wow i never knew seagulls couldnt fly before Jonathon discovered it. It would feel pretty good i guess to find out that you can do all this stuff that you didnt know before. It opens up a new dimension of travel. So many things would now become possible that werent previously. Jonathon seems very excited with the new possibilities, and so he should be.
From mats0072 - 9/29/06 9:40 AM I like this story because this book is can understand what's main character want to do. Main character want to fry. So main character many time try but he can do that. I think this story is pretty sad but i like this book.
From LeviTheMaster - 9/28/06 1:53 PM This story isn't that good. It goes on about a seagull wanted to be fast and wanted to go really fast, or something like that. It seems like it may be interesting, but it feels like I have to trudge through the whole story to get some sort of point of it. There is a lot of things about idolism of another bird, and this seems to be one of the main themes, but other than that, it seems to not have much of a point. Even so, reading the above things makes it seem like it could be alright.
From erke0004 - 9/28/06 1:30 PM I remember reading this story in year 6. Itwas one of the only books I have read, and I thought it was pretty good. The excerpt is only on one part of the book, but it is a good part showing the seagull's goals and whathe is wanting to do. I think that this story is pretty good, as I read the book. In the book the seagull flies so fast that he goes into another dimension or something, and then dies, If I remember correctly.
From simonl - 9/28/06 12:57 PM Jonathon Livingston Seagull contains a powerful message behind the text - the message of hope. Through the events the seagull completed, we see that stick ability is a very important skill, and that without it you can not achieve what you set out to do.
With Jonathon Livingston Seagull, it is a matter of looking beyond the text for the underlying message, which is the most important thing within it. However, some people may not fully understand the text, and make the connection, hence it could easily appear confusing to them, and the message in it goes unappreciated. Overall, I would have to say that the piece of literature is an incredibly powerful one, containing a valid and powerful message within it that each and everyone of us should be able to get something unique from. -Simon Langford From rodb0003 - 9/28/06 9:15 AM This poem was kinda sucky, it was like a childs story. Their wasnt a moral from it that we can really learn in this erra thats realistic, but it was ok if you were reding it to a 5 year old i guess.
From bolt0059 - 9/27/06 9:31 AM The whole story is a great metaphor for life in general and pushing your limits to achieve greatness. The sea gull in this case did a great job of recovering from defeat and slander and trying again and again in the face of failure. It may not seem like a big deal to us but for a sea gull it would be pretty incredible to fly at 214 mph. Once again this can just be a metaphor for achieving something great through perseverance. Andrew Bolt From smyt0076 - 9/26/06 11:16 AM I disagree with the orginal comment. Criticising a story just because it's different from conventinal ideas. I shall quote Alan from an earlier comment, " Dare to be different But dare to push the edges Dare to think wildly eccentrically Dare to persist Dare to share with others Dare to take a risk Dare to break convention Just dare Alan Laslett (21/5/91)"
To be honest, I didn't completely understand the story, but I do enjoy the fact that the author decided to be different.
From haythorpe - 9/26/06 8:57 AM Who cares if it is a bird it could be a dog or worm and still have the same message and that is people like to try new things.
The author uses a bird as an example of something trying something new and thumbs up to the bird. People say we need to think out side of the box and this bird is just doing something out side of the box. I think more people should think like that get out their and have a go you will never know if you never go.
From mano0032 - 9/26/06 8:53 AM I feel that there was a big message in this story, that you don't necissarily have to do what others expect of you. This seagull tried something different and put in much effort and time to try and do something, not only to improve his life, but also to improve others. Alike to what Alan said, we should 'dare to be different' we should try something new even if its dangerous, because the reward will outweigh the consiquences. The story was a little confusing at the start, which is why for my reading exersize I chose the last few paragraphs.
From bojk0002 - 9/26/06 8:53 AM
I mean to begin with I thought that this story was about a seagull which wants to commit suicide because he felt that he was not good enough. He was comparing himself to other birds which made him feel sad. However after reading through the story i got a different message to my original thoughts. As i proper read on, I have now gotten the message that he was not depressed however Jonathan Livingstone Seagull just wanted more out of life. he started by asking him self questions, like why can't I fly fast, and howcome I don't have the wings of a falcon or the eyes of an owl. He answered his questions by testing out theories and practising the skills he wanted to have in his life, and he succeded. by trying and trying and trying again. i think the moral to this story was that anyone can achieve anything. It just takes practise. Chloe Bojko From toop0008 - 9/26/06 8:34 AM i agree that this bird is a bit different from all the others, but isn't that the way people think. Beeing something different from anybody else. This bird is a kind of symbol for doing what you want for you and not anybody else wants. he does his own stuff and i think sometimes we should do the same. seperate from others to do our own.
From craw0069 - 9/26/06 5:01 AM Well, I have to say I am very impressed with the comments made here. I was wondering whether to write erudite, insighful first posts or to appear less than intelligent. I see that many students have seen through my attempts to get people writing. Maybe someone could correctly guess which initial comments were made by Pauline and which were written by Alan. Whose sense of style shows through most obviously? By now, most of you have workd out that literature is about challenging ideas and asking people to think from another point of view. If I h ad a choice, I would rather be the seagull than the women sitting on the porch, tacitally accepting the destruction of the world.
From leed0015 - 9/24/06 9:22 PM "The extract of the story had an excellent message about how you should follow your dreams no matter how unlikely it would seem." – Kite
So true, the story conveys a very important message. It shows how when you put your mind to it, you can do anything. While the main body of the text is about a seagull, reading “between the lines” the concepts and ideas behind the story can be applied to any aspect of our lives. This story demonstrates the strength of positive thinking and inspires people to reach for the stars. “Dare to Dream” – Anon.
Cheers,
Morgan
From hods0011 - 9/22/06 9:53 AM “This bird has a strange view of the world. Trying to fly faster than "normal" is a bit of a worry. I wonder if this author wrote anything else and actually got paid for it. It would take a very strange person to get the message of this story. "....he found that moving more than one feather at that speed will spin you like a rifle ball ..." Checking the physics behind this story would be an interesting task, but it just might detract from the splendour of the tale.”
What is normal? How can we define “normal” anyway? If this bird wants to challenge the odds and be different, make something of his puny, insignificant life then good on him! Besides, how is that worrying? Is it worrying that some people defy what could be called normality and stand up against evil? Does it worry us that there are some people that are smarter then normal and can predict bad things before they happen?
Secondly, why would you check the physics behind a story in which the central character is a sentient seagull? What would be the point of looking at the story with a physical, logical attitude when it is quite evidently not real?
Thirdly, lets look at a very simple fact: this story is about a seagull. Apart from being extremely obvious, this leads me to another question to the kind respondent: how many people could write a reasonably engaging story about a seagull, including emotions, social issues and structures within a seagull community, and finally a goal which a seagull, trying to defy the odds of normality, can dream about and try to achieve? How many people could use ideas set within a seagull’s perspective to be used as inspiration (the idea of folding in his wings) and make it reasonably somewhat believable (to the extent that some people enjoy reading it)?
By Ryan Hodson AAL From kovi0001 - 9/22/06 8:46 AM This story is as simple as it can ever get. It is a story about a certain Seagull Jonathan Livingston who aims not to be the ordinary, but to be the ordinary extraordinary. He is not satisfied with his restricted norm of life, but aims higher. He wants to fly, fly the perfect drop, fly at great heights and master it. However this is the way people suppose to be. Tommy From tran0143 - 9/22/06 8:41 AM “This bird has a strange view of the world. Trying to fly faster than “normal” is a bit of a worry.” (anon) How is this a bit of a worry? Haven’t you ever wanted to run faster than “normal”? Write faster than “normal”? Or read faster than “normal”? The bird is driven by determination, and I admire this. In the end of the story, the bird was able to achieve what he wanted. I look up to this. I think it is a bit selfish of you to say that “trying to fly faster than “normal” is a bit of a worry.” How would you feel if someone said all your dreams and aspirations are “a bit of a worry”?
From enni0006 - 9/22/06 8:19 AM i agree with sper0016 do we need to go on about physics in a story that clearly is not true or possible, i talking seagull is on floor for a talk about physics. The writer used words that really made it easy to image the settings, it was well writen but not my sort of story. it is good the way that he clearly states in the story that it is not true but at the same time it makes you believe that it is real.... From Hase0033 - 9/22/06 7:42 AM I think that this passage has more meaning then can be first interpreted. It challenges the reader to use their imagination, not just think of the facts and conclude that something is impossible. ‘Jonathan Gull’ is a bird that has a dream and despite being ridiculed – “Get Down! Seagulls never fly in the dark! If you were meant to fly in the dark, you’d have the eyes of an owl! You’d have charts for brains! You’d have a flacon’s short wings!" - is determined to live his dream.
By the way, those of you who doubt the idea that animals do ‘pointless’ things for their own enjoyment…. Pelicans have been observed flying high, way up, in the sky, for no apparent reason. A conclusion was drawn that pelicans fly up that high for ‘the pure buzz of it’. So maybe each species has habits which it enjoys and has no relevance to it’s lifestyle but humans haven’t discovered them yet. From albr0019 - 9/21/06 1:08 PM I thought this story was sort of inspirational because although its a bit wired it shows you that when you strive for things and persist in the things you want to achieve you can accomplish them even if no one else believes in you. I agree with harr0509 I thought that the piece was very well written and it feels as though your there in the story watching it happen.
From Crimpy - 9/21/06 1:02 PM What to say about a seagull who tries to fly like a falcon? It seems foolish at first, but it satisfies me to know that there are people out there that branch out and write about things as obscure as a seagull attempting to fly more erratically than your everyday seagull. Odd, eh? ~ Crimpy ~ the Mountain Goat, BLJ From zefr0001 - 9/21/06 11:29 AM I agree with most people on many things. This story has much meaning in that the seagull was about to kill himself because he was just a plain ordinary seagull. But then he realised that if he wants something then he has to work for it. People don't just wake up in the morning and have amazing talents. Also it is highly unlikely than a seagull could get up to terminal velocity because in the story the seagull is flying on the tips of his wings. For a seagull to do that would require much strength and determination because it would be so hard to keep so still and keep his wings in the same position because he his going so fast. The slightest movement of his wings at that speed would send him into to a fatal death. I do admire his determinaton and strength. I did not like this story too much because it was a little boring and very unbelievable.
Leon Zafry From galb0010 - 9/20/06 7:06 PM I agree with most people, that at the start of this story the seagull is about to die or commit suicide. Thats because he is until he realises there are better things to do, like putting up with the fact that he's just a seagull. In the same way, just because we aren't a super rich or athletic or smart person, we don't have a reason to jump off a cliff. We can do just what the seagull did, and try to achieve what he wanted to, no matter what anyone else said or how bad he was at it. He achieved his goal and he was happy. Just because the general population thinks what you is dumb, it normally isn't, it is just what the media would like you to think. G From brow0585 - 9/20/06 3:22 PM I think that the above comment about which states "I wonder if this author wrote anything else and actually got paid for it," is extremely harsh. Although this particular individual may think that "Johnathon Livingstone Seagull" was unrealistic is unfair to the author. Looking at the physics behind it this takes away the meaning that the author is trying to give the short story. If we look at the physics and think of how unrealistic a seagull flying at terminal velocity is it distracts reader. I think that it is unfair to judge the piece of how unrealistic it is when the author is trying to get a message across to his audience of readers. Also, if a bird would like to faster than any other bird why stop it? Many of us would like to be traveling or moving faster than each other. If a bird is trying to reach its own personal goal why stop it? We wouldn't stop each other from trying to achieve their goals so why stop others, even if it is a bird? From jord0052 - 9/20/06 3:02 PM The meaning of the story is not about how if the bird changes the shape of its wing it will go faster. The story is trying to say that anything is possible, when there is a will there is a way. The bird set his mind on doing something, in the story it was to fly faster, and he struggled and struggled. He was very depressed about it and thought there was no chance that he could. Even though it seems like he has given up he hasn’t really. He continues to think about what could help him to fly better and faster. This shows perseverance and determination. He then overcomes this problem which shows that even though he thought he couldn’t, he set his mind to it and he managed to do what he set out to do. This story tells not to give up so quickly and maybe think in a different way and you may overcome a problem.
I believe it has a good meaning and some good advice. From einf0001 - 9/19/06 4:48 PM I like the idea of the seagull that wants to fly faster. To me this makes the bird likeable, but the fact that it thinks about his movement in velocity and the heights in feets makes the story a bit unbelievable. From evan0267 - 9/19/06 4:24 PM Personally I really liked reading this story since it was uplifting and positive. I found it uplifting and positive because of its happy ending. “It would take a very strange person to get the message of this story” I don’t consider myself as a strange person and I understood the message in this story fine. This story demonstrated, if you believe in yourself you can achieve your dreams, no matter what colour, size or shape you are and in life to succeed you need to take risks. I believe this story illustrated this in a different but interesting way. From tiem0004 - 9/19/06 3:36 PM yes, you can say that johnathon livingston is strange but ultimately, strange is a point of view. the way that you percieve johnathon livingston may be completely different from some one else. Every one percieves things differently and thus every one will get something different out of this story, no one persons idea of what this story means is right and no ones is wrong. so although you may not agree with what some one else says or thinks doesnt make you right. the real interest in stories is not what the author says but what you hear. so get a point of view. From hain0046 - 9/19/06 12:12 PM I found this short story a bit ridiculous because seagulls don't think about doing aerobatics and the velocity of the speed when they are flying.
The story was also about following your dreams and taking risks to accomplish these dreams and goals. It was a story I believe that was meant to inspire us to achieve higher and aim high because if you try you can achieve anything if you just follow your heart. From lordofskulls - 9/19/06 11:26 AM I feel that this piece is about heroes and us trying to reach for a better future. It is about how we all struggle to achieve this may be flying fast for seagulls or excelling for humans in other ways. It tells you that you should follow your dreams and that your deeds and how you carry them out are who you are, you cannot hide from yourself. At the begining the seagul wants to kill himself but he finds a reason for living in his flying, a purpose. Although it is impossible for a bird to actually fly that fast I believe that it is simply how fast the bird believes himself to be flying instead of how fast he actually is flying. From cott0079 - 9/19/06 11:07 AM i don't think the bird has a strange view to the world at all. He dares to dream and should be proud of that. and what does it matter if he does want to fly faster? to say that it would take a very strange person to get this story is insulting because the message is very clear and i got it. either the person that wrote the opening comment didnt read the story properly or just didnt read between the lines. perhaps they didnt take in the texts and words that gave the story it's message.
From Dave - 9/19/06 8:37 AM
Cameron - Remember to use the </font> tag. You just made all the posts below you stay your colour and font...
I'm with Lauren - I thought it was about suicide with the first paragraph that I read in the booklet. However, it turns out to be quite the opposite. This story is trying to be inspirational, and encourage the readers to put in that extra effort, even if it's not physically possible. Just aim for it. However, (and most teachers are going to kill me for saying this) I aim at a possible level (generally lower) and therefore Its a bonus if I pass, or get better... Now all the teachers are going to be on to me....sigh. Dave From MWinter - 9/19/06 7:52 AM Re: To Whitman I’m not really sure I would classify this story as a sci-fi, more like just a fiction. As science fiction usually uses scientific knowledge to depict a story, science obviously does not come into it in this case. As offcourse a seagull can’t really fly that fast (I haven’t tested but as you said it would be impossible and I trust you on that).
Extra Thoughts I also think that a seagull wasn’t the best choice of a main character for this story. Making this inspirational character into something that wasn’t a human makes the story different to many others with this type of story line. But making it a seagull? I think I would have responded better to this text if it was a dog trying to run as fast as a panther or something. I don’t really like seagulls but, then again the seagull does give the story some of its charm that without it would be just another story that wouldn’t be worth writing a blog about.
From harr0509 - 9/19/06 6:13 AM Jonathon Livingston Seagull is about dreams and never giving up. I agree with Felim, it is a wonderful piece of writing and deserves credit. Eventhough it is fiction it needs credit for how realitic it sounds. This is well written. I loved the seagulls determination and would really like to read all of this story rather than just a short piece. From phan0036 - 9/18/06 1:49 PM
I tend to agree with the beginning statement (I’m sorry Alan) but I found this section of the book quite abnormal and wasn't sure where the book was trying to lead up to using seagulls as the main character and reasons for. Perhaps it is my way of thinking since I enjoy books , which I can relate to and seagulls is differently something I do not relate to. Although maybe Alan is right and writing something different compared to your normal writing is an idea.
From whitman - 9/18/06 1:42 PM This story is more of a sci-fi mixed with reality. I think it was the most interesting short story in the booklet simply because it was "different". In a real life situation however, this would be impossible. The bird would become a feather duster long before he reached terminal velocity. He would have burnt up. I also think that it would have been very unlikely for him to open his eyes at 214 mph. Apart from these small issues, it is a very entertaining short sci-fi.
David Whitman. From mill0505 - 9/18/06 1:40 PM While it was an interesting read I did not think that this story was that good overall. While it may have tried to tell us a lot about how anybody can be a hero and achieve their dreams I found it very unbelievable that a seagull would be traveling at more than 300 miles per hour. From zado0019 - 9/18/06 1:05 PM I would tend to agree with the statement that it would take a very strange person to get the message of this story. “The tale is an interesting read but it really didnt grasp my attention that much. It is something i would usually skip over.” This was a very legitimate statement posted by iNode as this story was very abstract and weird in nature. As for checking the physics behind the story...I wouldn’t waste my time. :P Having said all this, I don’t have reason to believe that this is that useless a story: it just takes a fair amount of devotion to try and grasp exactly what the writer is trying to say as it is narrated well, but lacks meaning and realness. :| From drag0019 - 9/18/06 1:02 PM “I wonder if this author wrote anything else and actually got paid for it.” ….this book was one of the best sellers for its time, and Ritched Barch did go on to publish many more books as well.
“Trying to fly faster than "normal" is a bit of a worry.” Yet, people trying to push them selves to the limit is alright. I guess anyone or anything pushing it’s self to the limit is quite a worry, but people and in this case a bird, gets enjoyment from doing these types of risks as well.
It would take a very strange person to get the message of this story. "....he found that moving more than one feather at that speed will spin you like a rifle ball ..." He’s trying to show that, at that kind of speed, if you were to move the slightest inch, you will lose control. See, I got it….. but I’m probably a very strange person…
I though this book was actually inspiring, it gave us an in site to what a bird would think, and possibility of what birds might actually do all day. From iNode - 9/18/06 12:55 PM "This bird has a strange view of the world. Trying to fly faster than "normal" is a bit of a worry. I wonder if this author wrote anything else and actually got paid for it. It would take a very strange person to get the message of this story. "....he found that moving more than one feather at that speed will spin you like a rifle ball ..." Checking the physics behind this story would be an interesting task, but it just might detract from the splendour of the tale."
You are correct in the term that his message is not cleary expressed, truthfully i feel that i still havent grasped on what his message is supposed to be about. The text however is well written, and the idea is amazing. It's point i would assume to express that if we work for something there is a way to reach our goal. It would be interesting to check the physics, but i have enough physics at the moment. :P The tale is an interesting read but it really didnt grasp my atention that much. It is something i would usually skip over. From keas0007 - 9/18/06 9:33 AM
In reply to the comment at the top of the page,
Just because the seagull’s view of the world is different from our own views it doesn’t mean that he is strange. Maybe the seagull is looking at the world the way we should all look at the world. Maybe we are the strange one’s. Is it possible that the seagull looks at us and thinks how strange it is for us not to follow our dreams? After all isn’t that all the seagull is doing. It only seems strange to us because of the world we live in, a world in which the majority of people abandon their hopes and dreams because they seem too hard to reach. So what if your hopes and dreams are hard to reach! The further away they are from you, the more satisfied and fulfilled you will feel once you succeed in reaching them.
From Cameron K
From sper0016 - 9/15/06 1:30 PM “I like physics and know a fair bit. From what I know in order to reach 214 miles per hour you would need to be in a nose dive for about ten seconds and about a kilometre from ground level in order to pull up in time to safe yourself. Termial velocity for a human is at 200 miles per hour for a human so I would assume it would be less for a smaller insect.
This is the only reason that I do not like this extract. Other then this it is well done.” I didn’t think this story was particularly great but it was not boring to read. Then again this would have been a totally different story if you brought in the facts of PHYSICS. Just about no movie or story you read is factual and that is what make it interesting. So I don’t see the point of even bringing in the fact of physics, especially into a story like this where seagulls can talk. If you are going to spend all you time analysing every book and movie you read you will not enjoy them. From pily0005 - 9/15/06 11:09 AM This bird has a strange view of the world. Trying to fly faster than "normal" is a bit of a worry. A bit of a worry? Although it may seem a bit arrogant to some people, trying to be better than the rest is what one of our defining personality traits. How many things has mankind done just for the sake of doing it? We didnt NEED to build a rocket and go into space, we didnt NEED to know how physics and the universe works. But mankind is made up of curiosity, and I dont see a reason why the seagull portrayed in this story should be seen any differently. Sure, we dont think that seagulls actually do try to fly fast to be the best, but I find that the writer of that comment thinks that no one should try at all,or be ridiculed for it.' I think the only thing that i disliked about this story was that it was written in first person. Which just isnt something I really enjoy reading. The dismal beginning of the story gets you hooked, thinking there must be something wrong in this bird's world. But as the story develops he overcomes his *depression* I suppose, and acheives his dream. ''Impossible is just a BIG WORD thrown around by small men who find it easier to live in the world they have been given then to explore the power they have to change it''- Adidas. I think that this quote, found by Saunders, has alot to do with the person who wrote the original quote. Why try to be ordinary, when you can be extraordinary? Hannah Pilypas From Harry - 9/15/06 9:56 AM I agree with Felim, the story is good, as it describes ways of overcoming the normal social ways of life and the barriers that are put in by life. And the story is good but it is also fictional but there are still some good aspects on life in it from my point of view. If we look at some of the best texts ever they are all fictional so I don't see why this one can't be up there with the best. However not all of these fictional books hold as strong of a message compared to this story, but some are more powerful and can impact some peoples lives in such away that the certain book may almost become like a bible to them. Two thumbs up from me! ~Harry Jackson~ From saun0134 - 9/14/06 1:53 PM Personal I didn't really like how this person responded to Johnathon Livingstone Seagull story. When he said ''This bird has a strange view of the world, Trying to fly faster than "normal" is a bit of a worry'' I got really upset and angry when I read this, What make this bird strange just because he has a dream and dares to push his limits until he achieved he goal of flying faster then any bird has flown before. He also said it will take a very strange person to get a message out of this story. I strongly disagree with him on this point and wouldn't be surprised if others did to. I got a very powerful massage from this which is ''Dare to be different'' and ''Dare to push your limits'', you can achieve anything you set your mind to, work hard and alway have believe in your abilities and you will achieve it.
''Impossible is just a BIG WORD thrown around by small men who find it easier to live in the world they have been given then to explore the power they have to change it''- Adidas. I really like this saying because I find it relate to this story in a really big way. Matthew Saunders
From felim - 9/14/06 1:46 PM the seagul story is a great tale of overcoming the restraints of social norms and aparent barriers. sure, the physics might be a bit wrong, but that's no reason to dis the story. it's FICTIONAL. birds dont really talk, and they dont fly that fast either, but its not a documentary. no-one says "the lord of the rings is crap because they talk in made up languages and elves dont exist."
From Kite - 9/14/06 1:11 PM The extract of the story had an excellent message about how you should follow your dreams no matter how unlikely it would seem. I found that this story was a good way to get the message across but I did not like the story itself. I like physics and know a fair bit. From what I know in order to reach 214 miles per hour you would need to be in a nose dive for about ten seconds and about a kilometre from ground level in order to pull up intime to safe yourself. Termial velocity for a human is at 200 miles per hour for a human so i would assume it would be less for a smaller insect. This is the only reason that I do not like this extract. Other then this it is well done. From pear0234 - 9/14/06 1:01 PM I found this story to be very compelling and interesting. It showed us some great points about that we humans are not the only animal that struggles in things we do. Humans spent ages trying to get the first plane to fly, and even longer to get them to fly at the current speed. This bird was trying to do the same thing, fly as fast as it can exactly the same things humans have tried to do. It took this bird a few trys to get it right but finally he did so and he gained great joy from something simple. I don't think that it really matters if the physics are correct as it is just a story. In most storys the science is wrong so why are you just asking about the physics of this story?
From Peter - 9/14/06 12:46 PM Ok, first of all the book is called “Jonathan Livingston Seagull” not “Jonathon Livingstone Seagull” as written in the title of this blog page. Secondly, the amount of stories and songs about birds, flight, and planes is ridiculous. Another story comparing the flight and speed of an aeroplane is not original and I don’t think this was a story worth reading. Then again, the above is just my own personal opinion so feel free to dispute my opinion, and read the story yourself to make your own judgements Regards Peter Ranieri From healey - 9/13/06 5:08 PM If a bird has nothing better to do than fly fast then let it. As a society we talk about how we are evolving and how we have so much in common with most organisms, then wouldn't it be likely that some animals may too also feel the need to do things humans do? Humans get a rush from speeding along the freeway or trying to break the world speed record, I say, let the bird fly fast. I dont agree with the comment that was made about whether the author had created another story. I think that if someone can write a short story about something as insignificant as a bird flying fast, then the man should be praised. If you want to slander someone else's writings then make sure you can write better first! From king0258 - 9/12/06 8:46 AM To be honest i thought this was about suicide when i read the short part in the questions, it wasn't until i read the whole thing that i found out it was completely different to suicide. I didn't understand all of it but most of it i did which is a good thing. Overall i didn't find this story as interesting as the other stories.
From stra0137 - 9/12/06 8:23 AM This comment suggests that the person who wrote it either didn't like the book or is very ignorant! Jonathon Livingston seagull isn't weird or strange and I don’t believe that I’m a very strange person as I understand it. From craw0069 - 9/7/06 3:25 PM After reading a student review of Jonathon Livingstone Seagull Dare to be different But dare to push the edges Dare to think wildly eccentrically Dare to persist Dare to share with others Dare to take a risk Dare to break convention Just dare Alan Laslett (21/5/91) Last Modified 9/26/06 4:52 AM | Hide Tools |
I found this story interesting in the way something, usually thought of as insignificant, was
described in such detail that the reader became involved with it. The use of a seagull as the main character in the story was quite unique, I thought, and made the story more intruiging.
I very much disagree with the comment that this story is "a bit ridiculous" as reading it gives people a message of hope and encourages people to not just stop trying when things/people are holding you back, but to push on. Keep trying and in the end you will find success.
Overall, I enjoyed the story and the use of description from the author. Jonathon Livingston Seagull is an uplifting story which I think many others would also like to read.